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Showing posts with label The Meeting Point. Show all posts
Showing posts with label The Meeting Point. Show all posts

Monday, 14 September 2015

Masturbation Monday - Editing

It's Monday!! Masturbation time ;)
I've been busy editing my book for paperback and was going over a chapter when I saw this prompt...


That kayla Lords spoils us! So it's not a new story but it goes with this quite well! :D
(forgive the formatting too...)

Excerpt from The Meeting Point

"What do you think you're doing?"Marcus sprang to his feet and turned to see that the cocky little Mae had sneaked up on him. His fury still hadn't subsided and he could have done without this intrusion.
"Nothing," he snapped, aware of how guilty it made him sound, when he actually wasn't up to anything.
"Take it easy. God, I don't care what you do in your secret little outings."
She really was so self-assured, Marcus could have given her a shake. So bloody opinionated too-she had everyone bending to her will. An image of her holding her ankles with her delightful ass exposed and his cock ramming in and out of it streaked through his imagination. It had come from nowhere and he shook his head to get rid of it. Now his hands were twisted into her hair, pulling her head back to expose her neck as he humped her from behind. Fuck's sake! Again, he tried to banish the thoughts from his mind, but they were just getting worse. Now he was fucking her in the ass, coming on her tits, eating out her pussy, grinding his cock down her throat.
"What's the matter?" she asked, looking quizzically at him as she stepped closer.
God no, stay back, he silently wailed as his cock thickened and rose under his loin cloth.
"Hmm, I see," she said, staring at his stirring without shame.
Did he just imagine her tongue dart out and lick her lips?
"You're dangerous," he managed to say as the image of her tied spread-eagled between two trees with his fingers up inside her soaking cunt blasted in.
"I know." Now she was close. She was so close he could smell her. Smell her lusty want. She took his hand and pulled it down straight to her pussy, forcing her wet self onto his middle finger which slipped in so sweetly. "Mmm, yes, that feels good. I'm so wet right now."
Marcus had no idea what the hell was going on. His emotions, loyalties, and lust were confusing him. Deborah was in despair, he should be with her. But Mae was fucking his hand right here and now, and his cock was so hard. Her juices were oozing into his palm as she rocked, opening up to him. Uncurling his fingers, he slid another two in and she gasped in that throaty way that told him she was almost there already.
Her eyelids fluttered momentarily, then she looked at him in the most divinely wicked way before raising her hand and spitting in her palm. It was probably the crudest thing he'd ever seen and he almost came in disbelief. She reached down to his crotch with her lubricated hand, and he staggered a little as she grasped him under his cloth and milked his cock like a crazed, wild thing as she still rode his hand. The walls of her cunt gushed and quivered in equal measure as he blasted into unity, an orgasming, spasming wreck of a man. Come spurted in all directions as they bucked and oozed together, climaxing out the tension and anger of the day.
When it was over and she clambered off his digits, she giggled. He wiped his hand on the fur cloth that only barely offered any dignity, realizing that it was completely spoiled by his own fluids.
"Why are you laughing?" he asked, feeling weirdly humiliated.
"Because that was awesome." She shook his shoulder. "Didn't you think so?"
He was expecting something else, like she was mocking him or she'd won some sort of victory over him, but when he looked into her flushed, oddly innocent face, he saw she had no agenda. She just liked to fuck. He must have taken too long to answer and she began to look unsure.
"You don't feel guilty or anything weird like that, do you?" Her eyes were wide and almost stricken. "God, I'm not trying to spoil anything, I just... Well, you know, you were here and the urge came over me. God, I'm sorry."
She was getting in a bit of a state and Marcus reached out to her.
"No, no, I really enjoyed it, I was just..." He pursed his lips, unsure of whether to tell a lie or come clean. He decided the latter. "I thought you were laughing because you'd gotten one over on me or something."
She looked hurt.
"Just because I like sex, because I like to communicate sexually, doesn't make me a manipulator. I'm not a bad person because I like to talk with my pussy."
It was Marcus's turn to laugh now. She looked completely confused as he gave a deep guffaw right from his belly.
"Sorry, it's just, you look so sad, but say such outrageous things. It's a very odd paradox."
She smiled.
"Yes, I've always been a little inappropriate at times with my choice of phrasing."
"I like to talk with my pussy?" He raised an eyebrow, and she turned away, embarrassed but smiling.
"Well. What's wrong with that?" Her head was bowed and she looked up through her hair, seeking something. Approval?
"Nothing, nothing's wrong with it, it's just hilarious."


So there you have it! Back to the editing for me... it's a tough job ;) 
Now click on that big purple square to get your Monday rocks off on other blogs too! 



Monday, 16 June 2014

It's Today!

Isn't it always? But yay for today!

The Final book in my Clockwork Butterfly trilogy is out today!
It's called The Meeting Point and I'm taking it on tour - you can see where I'm going on my .
interview page

I tell ya - I started writing these books three years ago with a single image in my mind - a tiny
butterfly intricately made of clockwork that would find it's way to it's owner through thick or thin. I had no idea then that it would evolve into a novel, let alone a trilogy. If I'd know, I may never have started it! ;)

Anyway - to those of you who have read any of these books or supported me on my writing journey - here it now ends (for a little while anyway)  - so I thank you.

Here is the attempt I made to articulate the little butterfly - I took apart my grandpappy's watch and a drinks can and made this... One of the loveliest things that could have happened was that the cover artist from Fantasia Frog actually used this very butterfly in the cover art. That was a big thrill!

Anyhoo - I hope you enjoy it!

lots of love Tabitha x x

Here's the blurb n buy links if you fancy more info...

Beachwalk Press
Amazon Com
Amazon UK

Blurb – The Meeting Point
A story of love, freedom, and the future of mankind. Deborah Regan has broken free from the prison where she’s been unjustly held for the past eight years. The scale of the devastation to the land outside is overwhelming. Toxins have taken hold, and the planet is dying. Deborah vows to find her lover Marcus and flee to the safety of the hills where their story first began.
Marcus is one of the few remaining men left on earth, and Deborah finds him held captive at a pleasure farm where he is kept to service rich and powerful women. Escape for him is complex and dangerous. They can only hope that the trio who helped Deborah before will come to their aid. Marcus has heard from his clients over the years of a mythical place with its own microclimate that toxin clouds seem to miss. He is sure they can find it and will be able to build a future together.
Mae, Lena, and Angelo feel compelled to find Deborah and Marcus who they know have a special connection that might prove essential to their survival. They make haste to track the couple and realize the plan they have chosen is fraught with danger and conflict.
Will they make it to the utopia Marcus dreams of?
Content Warning: contains graphic sex scenes with multiple partners, including m/f and f/f sexual interaction, strong language, and end of the world shenanigans
*The explosive climax to Taking Flight and A Clockwork Butterfly.


Other books in the series:

Book 1: A Clockwork Butterfly Now Available for only 99c! Throughout June 14
Book 2: Taking Flight – now available – comment on any of my tour posts and I'll pop you in a draw for a copy of this one – if you can't wait, here's the buy links:




Tuesday, 22 October 2013

Tis Done!

Well chaps and chapessess,

I'm just stopping by to exclaim that I finished a manuscript! I just put down the final word on my last book in The Meeting Point trilogy - and it was the word FIN. I always end my books with that one word. I always have - The End just doesn't seem to fit for me. Maybe FIN is pretentious or a bit dramatic, but hey- I'm a writer! It's what I do - pretend and be dramatic *flounce* :D

So now what?

Welllll, don't expect to see this book anytime soon! I have to go through every word and punctuation mark until I'm happy about the grammar, style, pacing, characterisation, mood, tone, continuity, plot line and conclusion. Because it's a trilogy, I'll have to go through the other two books *plug* A Clockwork Butterfly and Taking Flight (on sale now) - to see if I've forgotten about any plot twists or characters that have just simply disappeared from my memory! As if, surely not! But hey, it happens...

So far from reaching from the champers... oh who am I kidding, pass the bubbly! There may be a long way to go, but for now, I'll take the joy and satisfaction that comes from getting it down and out of my brain that ends with the delightfully dramatic and pretentious, FIN.

Thanks for stopping by x x x

PS - shhh, don't tell anyone but the book is called Finding Unity.
Here's a bit about The Meeting Point: It's an erotic trilogy exploring a future where the world is in peril and humans are facing extintion. Don't worry - it is still a world of beauty and passion where everyone delights in the spiritual joy of sexual abandon :D
Here are some pictures of our world which inspires, fulfills and excites me every day...




Growing, not slipping